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Posted on 2013-05-08 08:37:47 by Mindwipe
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Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-05-08 08:39:06 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Repost. I realized I missed an effect on one of the words. Also, I tried moving the "obey" into a more empty space. Hope that side doesn't look too crowded now.
petal
Posted on 2013-05-09 01:03:36 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Well, obviously I'm biased here, but I think it looks better.
Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-05-09 01:52:58 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Your feedback helped a lot, petal. If you hadn't made me take a second look at the text, I may not have noticed the missing effect. :)
Vanndril
Posted on 2013-05-09 05:27:27 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Well, obviously I'm biased here, but I think it looks sexy. :3
Posted on 2013-05-08 08:37:47 by Mindwipe
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Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-05-08 08:39:06 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Repost. I realized I missed an effect on one of the words. Also, I tried moving the "obey" into a more empty space. Hope that side doesn't look too crowded now.
petal
Posted on 2013-05-09 01:03:36 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Well, obviously I'm biased here, but I think it looks better.
Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-05-09 01:52:58 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Your feedback helped a lot, petal. If you hadn't made me take a second look at the text, I may not have noticed the missing effect. :)
Vanndril
Posted on 2013-05-09 05:27:27 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Well, obviously I'm biased here, but I think it looks sexy. :3
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