Vanndril
Posted on 2013-03-22 22:19:46 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Now THIS is the type of furry art I can get into. It's not overly animalistic, but is still obviously furry.

Nice text, btw. The only thing that really bugs me about it is the way it aligns. Still, I love these types of stories.

Anonymind
Posted on 2013-03-23 05:16:12 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Glad you liked it! If I may ask, what about the alignment of the text did you not like? Tabs in too far? More margin space?

Also, I know it may be a bit hard to tell since one eye is closed and the other is partially open, but I was going for more ring than spiral eye pattern.

Vanndril
Posted on 2013-04-05 04:17:06 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
Gah! How'd I miss this comment for so long?
...anyway, yeah. What bothers me about the text alignment is, mainly the way you made the "She knew..." list. The indentation combined with the lack of indentation for the second line of each statement, as well as the fact that there's no empty line space between each statement in the list makes the text seem cluttered and chaotic.

Anonymind
Posted on 2013-04-05 06:39:02 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
I'll take it under advisement. Thanks for the feedback!

Anonymous
Posted on 2013-08-02 05:11:11 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down)    (Report as spam)
One word and ONE word only to describe my reaction to this. And that word is......... sequel.

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