Sorta. It's better if you upload the pics in reverse order so that they show up in the correct order in the child posts, but it's a short manga, so it doesn't matter too much here. The tags needed work, but I fixed 'em (and was ULTRA thorough >.>) Also, you don't need to tag every page, just the parent. The only other thing I would like to have on manga/doujin posts is a link to the E-Hentai gallery, since some people may prefer to read manga there instead of here.
You correctly made the pages into child posts. That was what the anon from a few days ago didn't do, which left me with a mess to clean up.