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Posted on 2012-10-11 08:01:09 by petal
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Posted on 2012-12-05 02:59:58 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I hate to be a grammar Nazi/party pooper, but I couldn't help but notice-you've used "whet" wrong. To whet an appetite is to sate it-"awaken" would be a much better word.
Posted on 2012-10-11 08:01:09 by petal
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GaLaXyDeStRoYeR
Posted on 2012-12-05 02:59:58 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I hate to be a grammar Nazi/party pooper, but I couldn't help but notice-you've used "whet" wrong. To whet an appetite is to sate it-"awaken" would be a much better word.
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