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Posted on 2013-07-25 14:30:01 by dileet
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Anonymous
Posted on 2013-07-25 21:37:13 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
This is fucking terrible.
Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-07-25 22:21:38 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Looks pretty alright to me. Though, I think it would be better if the text weren't placed over the pic on this one. Also curious as to why Misty's lines have no capitalization or punctuation.
Grim
Posted on 2013-07-25 23:31:34 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I suspect 1) the placement represents drifting, airy thoughts, 2) the lack of capitalization is much like the lack of identity - such as when writer decide to have a slave refer to themselves as i instead of I, 3) the lack of punctuation relates both to the previous 2, as well as perhaps the spaciness of the thoughts
were these good choices? Eh, it's ok by me
Kala
Posted on 2013-07-26 01:43:23 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Oh, hey. I remember this particular manipulater's work. They always hover around this level of 'quality'.
...Most of their pictures are also not suitable for this site.
Vanndril
Posted on 2013-07-26 03:12:28 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I remember this guy's stuff, too. I have a fair number of his manips. I think I found them on hypnochan way back when.
Not all his stuff is quite this sloppy, though most of it is loli anyway, so those others can't be posted here. This is not his best work, for sure. And as far as the punctuation goes, I believe Grim is spot on. If memory serves, a lot of the dialogue from the enslaved in his manips were written that way. And only for those who are enslaved.
Posted on 2013-07-25 14:30:01 by dileet
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Anonymous
Posted on 2013-07-25 21:37:13 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
This is fucking terrible.
Mindwipe
Posted on 2013-07-25 22:21:38 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Looks pretty alright to me. Though, I think it would be better if the text weren't placed over the pic on this one. Also curious as to why Misty's lines have no capitalization or punctuation.
Grim
Posted on 2013-07-25 23:31:34 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I suspect 1) the placement represents drifting, airy thoughts, 2) the lack of capitalization is much like the lack of identity - such as when writer decide to have a slave refer to themselves as i instead of I, 3) the lack of punctuation relates both to the previous 2, as well as perhaps the spaciness of the thoughts
were these good choices? Eh, it's ok by me
Kala
Posted on 2013-07-26 01:43:23 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
Oh, hey. I remember this particular manipulater's work. They always hover around this level of 'quality'.
...Most of their pictures are also not suitable for this site.
Vanndril
Posted on 2013-07-26 03:12:28 Score: 0 (vote Up/Down) (Report as spam)
I remember this guy's stuff, too. I have a fair number of his manips. I think I found them on hypnochan way back when.
Not all his stuff is quite this sloppy, though most of it is loli anyway, so those others can't be posted here. This is not his best work, for sure. And as far as the punctuation goes, I believe Grim is spot on. If memory serves, a lot of the dialogue from the enslaved in his manips were written that way. And only for those who are enslaved.
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